This is a video just for a guideline of what still needs to be done, Evidence of what i have done so far with editing. I decided to do this because it will be the easiest way to explain to my actor on what needs improving and what bits need doing.
Powis. This is going to need 'performance' in the form of lip syncing to make it seem more 'real'.
This mise en scene needs attention, I'd expect to see a messy room, possibly a girl in bed with him, eye makeup to make your brother seem tired and run down
This anti drinking vid
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mo_49X7B53o
has excellent mise en scene. Try and emulate without trashing your parents house.
You'll need greater shot variety to add pace. Think about all the close ups you could be using. By keeping the camera 'tight' on the subject you can eliminate a lot of the problems with mise en scene.
i don't think you have enough shots. the editing doesn't really match the music. this causes a few problems. also the mise en scene is rather suburban, when it should scream 'PLAYA' or some such. it isn't without merit but a bit of a rethink is in order. look at the suggestions Mr Smith has made especially Bloc Party.
Powis. This is going to need 'performance' in the form of lip syncing to make it seem more 'real'.
ReplyDeleteThis mise en scene needs attention, I'd expect to see a messy room, possibly a girl in bed with him, eye makeup to make your brother seem tired and run down
This anti drinking vid
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mo_49X7B53o
has excellent mise en scene. Try and emulate without trashing your parents house.
You'll need greater shot variety to add pace. Think about all the close ups you could be using. By keeping the camera 'tight' on the subject you can eliminate a lot of the problems with mise en scene.
Is all this meant to be done by friday? im concerned
ReplyDeletei don't think you have enough shots. the editing doesn't really match the music. this causes a few problems. also the mise en scene is rather suburban, when it should scream 'PLAYA' or some such. it isn't without merit but a bit of a rethink is in order. look at the suggestions Mr Smith has made especially Bloc Party.
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