The main cover image is excellent, it is let down however by the font on the central square.
The image of you making aheart with your hands doesn't work visually. You seem weak and timid.Why lyrics to just one song? Back of case not strong enough, too many jaunty angles.
Not enough generic conventions evident on the poster. Which record label have you used? Where are band reviews? Image not good enough, you look like Davey Crockett.
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ReplyDeleteThe main cover image is excellent, it is let down however by the font on the central square.
The image of you making aheart with your hands doesn't work visually. You seem weak and timid.Why lyrics to just one song? Back of case not strong enough, too many jaunty angles.
Not enough generic conventions evident on the poster. Which record label have you used? Where are band reviews? Image not good enough, you look like Davey Crockett.
Digi 4/10
Poster 1/10
Oh dear, i guess i have a lot to work on then.
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